Delightful!
I loved the presentation of this game. The voice work was excellent. The narration of the story, the sound effects, and the death/try again scenes made it seem like someone was reading a book to me. The gameplay and level design was inventive for such a simplistic design and the graphics fit very well. The story was alright. It just seemed like you could have done more with it, however, the storytelling was also well done.
Overall, this was a very creative work and I hope that you can build on it in your future work, which I look forward to seeing.